[Sumover-dev] [svn commit] r4199 - vic/branches/cc/docs/plan

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Author: soohyunc
Date: Mon Jun 30 20:40:45 2008
New Revision: 4199

Modified:
   vic/branches/cc/docs/plan/1-intro.tex
   vic/branches/cc/docs/plan/2-overview.tex
   vic/branches/cc/docs/plan/report.tex

Log:
report wording... (contd')


Modified: vic/branches/cc/docs/plan/1-intro.tex
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--- vic/branches/cc/docs/plan/1-intro.tex	(original)
+++ vic/branches/cc/docs/plan/1-intro.tex	Mon Jun 30 20:40:45 2008
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 \emph{vic/rat}~\cite{MEDIATOOLS} is a media tool that can have interactive
 real-time audio/video conference. These tools have been used in many relevant
 research projects such as AccessGrid~\cite{ACCESSGRID}, AVATS~\cite{AVATS} and
-UltraGrid~\cite{UltraGrid}. Currently, \emph{vic}/RAT is supported by AVATS
+UltraGrid~\cite{UltraGrid}. Currently, \emph{vic/rat} is supported by AVATS
 project~\cite{AVATS}. \emph{vic} supports many video codecs since its initial
 development and implements RTP/RTCP protocol~\cite{RTP} over UDP to increase
 interoperability. In this year's GSoC project, we would like to implement

Modified: vic/branches/cc/docs/plan/2-overview.tex
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--- vic/branches/cc/docs/plan/2-overview.tex	(original)
+++ vic/branches/cc/docs/plan/2-overview.tex	Mon Jun 30 20:40:45 2008
@@ -1,18 +1,19 @@
 % $Id$
 
-\subsection{\label{ssec:high-arch}High-level \emph{vic} Architecture}
+\subsection{\label{ssec:high-arch}High-level, proposed \emph{vic} Architecture}
 
-We have drawn a high-level overview of \emph{vic} architecture (sender only)
-that has congestion control modules as in Figure~\ref{fig:high-vic-arch}. This
-figure represents a high-level overview of \emph{vic} so that we could see the
-major components of the system, and how they are interacting with each other. 
+We have drawn a high-level overview of the proposed \emph{vic} architecture
+(sender only) that has congestion control modules as in
+Figure~\ref{fig:high-vic-arch}.  This figure represents a high-level overview of
+\emph{vic} so that we could see the major components of the system, and how they
+are interacting with each other. 
 
 \vspace{1cm}
 
 \begin{figure}[!h]
 \begin{center}
 \includegraphics[scale=.5]{./img/high-vic-arch}
-\caption{\label{fig:high-vic-arch}High-level \emph{vic} Architecture 
+\caption{\label{fig:high-vic-arch}High-level, proposed \emph{vic} Architecture 
 with CC Mechanisms}
 \end{center}
 \end{figure}

Modified: vic/branches/cc/docs/plan/report.tex
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--- vic/branches/cc/docs/plan/report.tex	(original)
+++ vic/branches/cc/docs/plan/report.tex	Mon Jun 30 20:40:45 2008
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@
 \bibliographystyle{abbrv}
 \DeclareGraphicsRule{*}{eps}{*}{}
 
-\title{Project Plan}
+\title{Congestion Control for Real-time Mulimedia Application}
 \author{Soo-Hyun Choi}
 
 %%% CHECK IF PDFLATEX OR LATEX
@@ -46,16 +46,19 @@
 \begin{center}
 %\includegraphics{logo}
 \vspace*{\stretch{1}}
-{\LARGE \textsf{\textbf{Project Plan\\}}}
+{\LARGE \textsf{\textbf{Congestion Control for Real-time Multemida Application 
+\\}}}
+\vspace{.5cm}
+{\large \textsf{\textbf{Project Plan}}\\}
 \vspace{1cm}
 {\large \textsf{Soo-Hyun Choi\\}}
 {\small \textsf{s.choi at cs.ucl.ac.uk}\\}
 {\small \textsf{+44 (0)20 7679 0352}\\}
-{\small \url{http://www.cs.ucl.ac.uk/staff/S.Choi}\\}
+{\small \url{http://www.cs.ucl.ac.uk/staff/s.choi}\\}
 \vspace{2.5cm}
 {\large \textsf{Supervised by \\
 Piers O'Hanlon and Colin Perkins \\}}
-\vspace{2.5cm}
+\vspace{2.0cm}
 {\normalsize \textbf{Keywords}\\Internet congestion control, Real-time
 multimedia application}
 \end{center}